One Hour Compo - Round 611 (OHC611)
Outline
Tonight's theme is a picture theme. Please see the resources below.
You will have 1 hour to complete your song and 10 minutes to finish it up. You will then have an additional 10 minutes to upload your song. At 6 PST/9 EST you may begin your mixing, please have your files uploaded by 7:20 PST/10:20 EST. Join us for discussion in #thasauce on irc.esper.net OR our new Discord channel!
Resources
Rules
You will have 1 hour to complete your song and 10 minutes to finish it up. You will then have an additional 10 minutes to upload your song. At 6 PST/9 EST you may begin your mixing, please have your files uploaded by 7:20 PST/10:20 EST. Join us for discussion on Discord!
Entries (18)
the battle's just begun the war i keep inside
i'll keep it secret from you,
keep it for myself
and when you're out of sight is when
my life begins,
i'll keep it secret from you,
keep it for myself
the more i hide from you, the more i keep inside
i'll keep a secret from you,
keep it for myself
and when i'm all alone
is when my life begins
i'll keep a secret from you,
keep it for myself
Yo, first time doing something like this, hope to try more of this later.
Message in a bottle, I hope it's real
Been a long time since there was something I could feel
Got a lot of regrets, but no apologies
My past is enough to fill ten anthologies
Message in a bottle, are you the one?
I'm too wasted to know when I'm even done
Wrote it all in ink, till I couldn't even think and I
Flushed it down the dirty kitchen sink 'cause I
Don't know what to do anymore or anyhow
Seems like we're all waiting forever for the here and now
But tomorrow never comes, it's always the same deal
Lock yourself in your room until the world heals
Sick, they're dying out there in the streets
But we can't even bother to try and make ends meet
Home alone with my phone, throw me a bone, 'cause I
Can't do this on my own, I'm no Sylvester Stallone
Maybe tomorrow I'll have the strength to go on...
Message in a bottle, I'll keep it close till I'm gone...
Message in a bottle, I hope it's true
Tell me it's alright, tell me what to do
You always said to stay strong, to get along, but they
Say I'm wrong and the road is just too long and I
Have enough trouble trying to fall asleep at night
Can't seem to stop worrying about the world's plight
Our race is a blight it's a terrible sight how they
Seem to delight in causing us fright out of spite
Message in a bottle, please take me away
I'm out of my element here, I feel like I'm prey
Kids on the internet, they're fueling flames as I
Stay indoors and play my video games, but I
now I can't stay complacent, can't move on
The terror is adjacent, right outside my lawn
I testify, amplify, claim to rectify
But I lie, 'cause in the end I'm just another guy
Maybe tomorrow I'll have the strength to go on...
Message in a bottle, I'll keep it close till I'm gone...
am tired
[verse]
Distant relationships are a toil and a pain to the heart
I start to forget your face every second that we are apart
I feel so compelled to reach you, and feel your presence again
But all that I got right here is some paper and a pen to write you
[chorus]
Back and forth
Grab a pen and send me a letter, baby
Write me back
Let me know as soon as you can, my dear
Jot it down
You can go and send me a letter, baby
Please reply
Go to send a message and send it fast
[verse]
So to my relief I find it, your warm and sunny reply
and though it seems energetic I hang my head back and sigh
Its not quite the same without you here in the flesh and with me
But just for the moment Ill keep my pen pal stationary to write you
[bridge]
Penmanship can reveal such character
Lines that go on and on, no editor
Grammar so slight, and careless structuring
Fretting on every word, as it goes
is the typo in the title an accident?
or was it intentional
DUN DUN DUN
In a place
You were before
In a time
I knew no more
You threw a note
Into the sea
Leaving time
For you and me
solo ad libbed ENJOY
Uncle Rego's Reverbed Accordion (this was streamed lol)
Should've known better than to try to sing before coming up with a melody
Hear these walls
What do they say?
Scenes of shock, scenes of sadness
Blocking the waves from curious ears
If walls had ears
What would they hear?
If written down
What hurt would be known?
Look at these walls
What have they seen?
Tears of hurt, eyes of sorrow
Blocking the light from wondering eyes
If walls had eyes
What would they see?
If written down
What hurt would be known?
Why did I not notice you?
But instead I listened idly by
My regret is that I did not help you
I just closed my eyes.
tried something different this week
wow vocals are so much easier to work with when you don't have to make them yourself
Yeah, i think i went too loud on this one.
That's Mixing for ya lol
I found this track tightly wound up and wedged between some bricks in a wall. It fell apart as I tried to extract it from it's masonry prison. I took the tattered fragments and lovingly reassembled them. Most things don't go back together undamaged.
Writing is weird!
You leave a message, hoping that the future will be brighter and clearer than the present.