F-Zero X - Dream Chaser (PRC315)

Votes (3)

Feb 12, 2016 bundeslang
  1. Zero is back
    gercr
  2. Show Me Your Moves!
    PlanarianHugger
  3. [Bonus] Dreamer Chase
    NinjaPenguinDan
PlanarianHugger - The song starts really simple, I like the combination of samples. The part around 1:30 is good. Ending is a bit unexpected.
Gercr - This genre works very good for this source. There are several good ideas in this song and I like that whistle which is at some points of the song. The song misses some variation. Would like to hear a more complete version of this song.
NinjaPenguinDan - Didn't expect this genre with this source but it works nice. The song is very calm, the strings are great.
Feb 14, 2016 gercr
  1. Show Me Your Moves!
    PlanarianHugger


a very creative approach, good job
Feb 14, 2016 NinjaPenguinDan
  1. Zero is back
    gercr
  2. Show Me Your Moves!
    PlanarianHugger

PlanarianHugger, the main thing I’d have liked to hear in your song is more rhythmic variation. There’s this one backing arpeggio that starts at about 0:07, and it doesn’t change speed for the entire song. The song could really use a more energetic (or slower, if you’d prefer) part somewhere, if only to keep things interesting. Also, I’d have liked to hear more dynamics, more variation in the volume. As it is, I can’t really identify the climax of the song. Overall, I’d like to see some more polish, but you still made it work. Nice job!

Gercr, I think the drums and lead are a bit quiet. It’s a pretty busy mix, so you might want to dial those up or pull some other things back. In addition the ending is more than a little abrupt. Also, I’m not sure about the lead at about 1:13. I mean, it’s mainly just personal preference, but there’s something about it that bothers me. I’d consider changing it up a bit. It’s really up to you, though. In general, I’d like to see more work done on the mixing, but aside from that, you did really well. Excellent!