One Hour Compo - Round 655 (OHC655)
Votes (8)
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a tire in the shape of a roach named steve
cotmm68030 -
Bicycle Trip
DDRKirby(ISQ) -
Silhouetted Cycle
NickC
lots of good stuff this week as per usual like generally happens often most of the time
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The Journey's the Thing
Souperion -
Twilight Bike Ride
Suzumebachi -
a tire in the shape of a roach named steve
cotmm68030
The top three were great journeys. I especially liked the vast emptiness and the ambience of Souperion's.
Suzu for the jazziness
CoTMM for the weird combination of ambient and groovy.
Honorable mentions:
DDRKirbyISQ
MisaelK
NickC
InvisibleObserver
TheVideoGamer
DarkShadow
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Twilight Bike Ride
Suzumebachi -
We Ride at Dawn
nukage -
Bike-O-Pation
ethansight
I voted, yay! Suzu's entry was tasty as heck, nukage's track was even better than usual, and ethansight's was just fun
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Twilight Bike Ride
Suzumebachi -
Bicycle Trip
DDRKirby(ISQ) -
Ride Away
A2Z
@Everyone - Yes i decided to dunk the whole thing in reverb, because i'm a monster...
@Wassup Thunder - And we haven't even started yet. Wow....
@Souperion - Why thank you!
@Arcana - Dam, how'd you guess!? That's correct...
@Misael.K - Or maybe it's just a happy melody, who knows. lol...
@Suzums - Eurobeat? Eurobeat!? Really? haha....
@Misael.K - I don't know what you are referring to when you mention Japanese music, i need an adult...
@Souperion - You missed the hats, and the breakbeats...
@InvisibleObserver - Regal? Is that a intentional typo?
@NickC - It is, until you have like a weird tail at the beginning of the song, implying you didn't let the reverb fade out enough :/
@Misael.K - What tambourine? You know referring to the breaks are you? I can't remember adding a tambourine in...
@Everyone - I'm mad that you guys always seem to pick perfect gif's to go with my track...
@Misael.K - You will thank me, when you listen to the intro lol. Reverbs as huge as this, need long tails.
@Everyone - Thanks for the kind words!
P.S - I like how CotMM has managed to turned his entrant, into a discussion about me breaking the 6 minute rule lol. For once it's happened to someone other than me, and i still get ratted out lol.
Now then....
TheVideoGamer - The images to me are pretty beautiful, but also quite simple too. I mean i don't know what else to say, it's a person cycling in the open road, while the sun goes down. Nothing is more beautiful than that. I made sure the music was just as beautiful, going for very open, and extremely spacious piano parts soaked in reverb, alongside breakbeats akin to DnB, as well as chords and a melody to complete the whole thing without it being repetitive. The only other thing left is a pulsating bass, just to enhance the ravey vibe of it all. As a whole, probably one of my favourites, but only because of how i integrated the melody, and even then, it still needs a bit more work, however i still think it's my favourite. Anyways, hope you enjoy!
Lyra_183 - Ooh, I love how you've started to incorporate music into your singing. Before it was 2 separate entities. Now it's starting to become it's own backing track. The reverb is a lovely addition, keep at it! Well done!
cotmm68030 - You have some explaining to do lol. All jokes about length aside, i dig this a lot. I love the ethical styled percussion, but written in a way, that makes it almost Dark Ambient like, you know...the style i often associate with you. The rhythms are really cool and unique, the delay is why it stands out, they definitely blend well with the pads. Now the length is actually a good point to bring up, because honestly, i feel it's a little on the long side, especially for something as minimalistic as this. It would be awesome as a 4-5 minute entry, not 7 minutes. After a while i get a bit bored. Good job though!
DarkShadow - DarkShadow's gonna DarkShadow lol. Seriously though, i love this one, it's very acid like, like someone reverse engineering a 303. I think this is a nicely done DarkShadow entry, well done!
A2Z - Very pretty, topped with a lot of really nice ambience. I love the way sounds pop in and out, the delay on the raindrops just really works. I love this one, awesome work!
Nukage - The vocal chops are enough for me to know it's showtime. You really just excel so well at EDM. Especially fond on that snare, well done!
Ethansight - Ethansight level harmony, as always. Great plucks, and a very funky drum loop here, it's like house vibes, but in a more retro VGM way. Well done!
thesocialcontract - Really nice work here, great range of sounds. If i have to be honest, it takes a while to get going. I'm not huge, on tracks at around 1 minute, that end up with a long 40 second intro, comprised of 1 sound being looped, because it doesn't give me much to look at, and it feels like it's wasting time. Sorry dude, i'm afraid it's how i feel. Good job though!
Souperion - Lovely choir, really takes you on a journey. Very soothing to the ear i must say, definitely some pretty chords in this track. It is a simple track, but ambient isn't a complicated genre of music. All in all, lovely work, well done!
Wassup Thunder - Ok here me out, are you guys friends or something? Both of you have made 5 minute pieces, and submitted at the same time. I know i'm being stupid, but i find it a bit suspicious. This is a really nice melodic track, it seems you are continuing your practicing from last week. I still feel if you want to make true "Lo-Fi Hip Hop", i would invest in more heavier beats (Only because i don't feel like it sounds like Lo-FI Hip-Hop. I'm not trying to dictate how the genre should sound, it's just from the Lo-FI i've listened to...), however if i forget about genre conventions, this is a lovely melodic idea, with nice harmony. Well done!
Suzumebachi - Ooooooooooooh Jazz guitar, please don't do this to me ;-;. You are like the master of harmony. The chords, the drums...i can't, why are you so talented....
DDRKirby(ISQ) - Nice to see you've made it on time. Feels like you are trying to do a Pokemon type beat, Route 56 or something lol. I'm all for it, Pokemon has lovely music. This is extremely pretty, and definately a lovely follow-up from Suzums. Digging the high-energy chips, Another awesome entrant, amazing work!
NickC - More ambient goodness. Lovely plucks here, it's got a very weird adventurous feel to it, but with strange key-changes throughout. I think your modulating by a half-step or something. It's a little strange, but nothing too out of place. The melody and chords though, do work well for me, and even with some of it's dissonance, the idea is a lovely approach. Well done!
obScene - No light entrant this week? I guess Bicycles aren't welcoming to you lol. Very horror-movie like, and aggressive. I imagine some dude, getting chased by some demon, it's pitch black, and you only have a torch on you. I really don't see much correlation to the theme, but i do like the strange melody ideas here, a lot. Well done!
Misael.K - Lovely pad chords, very nice harmony. When the drums and bass come in, the whole thing comes to life. Personally i'm missing a melody of some kind, the bass is a bit too strong, could be blended in a bit better and the track is a little on the simplistic side as a whole. I do like the chords though. Good job!
Arcana - Big thumping drums here, has a bit more of that cinematic vibe to it. The piano melodies are really well produced, despite being a little rhythmically off to me, and at some-parts a little dissonant (Good potential, i will say). I would also blend your voice a bit more, it's very loud. I still think you are improving a lot with your singing however, and the track in itself is a great idea, just needs a bit of polish. Good job!
InvisibleObserver - I'm in love with the synths used, this is real sound design. That acid bass creeps, in for 2 seconds, then get's lost. I thought this was gonna be acid techno for a second, i would be down for that. The sound design is amazing though, and for once, i love the drums, mixed at perfect volume. The compression here is just right. The only gripe i have, is that majority of the impacts (The big thumping drums, used for effects), really cuts through the mix, and is borderline obtrusive. To make this among your finest entry, i would remove them, and do without, because it just gets in the way, distracting me from the rest of the stuff. Good job though!
Atmospherium - Wow this waveform tells me, this is gonna be a full blown distortion festival, and i was right. I love distortion though, and in this case, amazing ideas. Your voice is always a godsend to listen to. So versatile, and brimming with incredible effects. I love how you just integrate the voice so well, i mean that alone is enough for me to, just give it a well done ranking! (The beat is very funky though too).
Top 3 - Suzumebachi, DDRKirby(ISQ), A2Z
Man you guys are getting so good, i can't vote for 3 anymore. These especially need to be on the top 3:
Nukage
Ethansight
Souperion
Wassup Thunder
Atmospherium
Awesome - Lyra_183, DarkShadow, A2Z, Nukage, Ethansight, Souperion, Wassup Thunder, Suzumebachi, DDRKirby(ISQ), NickC, obScene, Atmospherium.
Needs Work - cotmm68030, thesocialcontract, Misael.K, Arcana, InvisibleObserver.
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We Ride at Dawn
nukage -
Bicycle Trip
DDRKirby(ISQ) -
Wheels of Hope
Arcana
Hey! Gonna do a long one!
Atmospherium: the way you started was really cool I like the vocals! Load and angry. Look at me look at me! Nice and fast over all really cool!
InvisibleObserver: very calming how you started and the horns were cool! the bubububububububuobobbubububu doood dooo doo is neato!
TheVideoGamer: Very nice start nice and simple (at least to me) the piano is nice and calming. in the begining then they get almost cheerful!
Arcana: nice chilling vibe to the begining the simple bumdadodo every now and then is neat. the transition to the second bit is neat and like something from Twilight.
Misael.K: the vibe on yours kinda was like something at the end of the movie when the credits play! btw.... How do I get on the awesome list?
ObScene: Yours was pretty neato! I like the dissorted dededea. and the beat to it!
Nichc: Yours gave off a slightly matilda vibe in the begining pretty cool. the way in the middle the deeeeeeeeeeeeeeddeeeeeeeeeddddddddddddaaaaaaaaaaaaa is coolo!
DDRKerby: Yours was like really really cool!!!! I like how fast it is! and its neato!
Suzemabachi: yours is chill like something you would hear in a elevator.
Wassup Thunder: yours is nice! the deeeeeeeeeeee through out the whole thing is coolio
Souperion: ding ding! ;) its nice and calming but also creepy?
thesocialcontract: yours is simple clean and nice I genuinly like yours!
EthanSight: Yours is video gamie (Not the person) its neat!!!
nukage: Is this you? this so good! The vocals is really reallty cool! almost glitchy!
A2Z: yours is simple and calming its something you listen to while walking down the beach!
Darkshadow: Chaotic as always nice and cool it just makes my bop my head!!
Father dearest: quiet and nice then grows louder then quiets down a bit then the drum thingies go in. very neato
Lyra_183: the begining is intential. I know it does not really fit with the theme but I was thinking you are riding you bike in the dark sunset alone. so yea.
I did a long one!
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Handlebars
Atmospherium -
We Ride at Dawn
nukage -
Twilight Bike Ride
Suzumebachi
lyra:
it remains a joy to hear what you're cooking up each week, unaware of what you're making until it's finished. You did a fine job of slicing up those piano chords to compliment the lyrics you wrote. that detuned intro though... y tho?
cotmm:
in retrospect it could have been shorter for the context of compo, but as a stab at ambient/rhythmic it felt appropriate as i wrote it. i think this might be among my favorite things i've cooked up for a compo.
darkshadow:
tonal instability never sounded better.
a2z:
very pretty. loved the deeper tones toward the end.
nukage:
great stuff as always. loved the inclusion of the vocals.
ethansight:
pleasant and retrained.
thesocialcontract:
nothing wrong with building an arrangement from simple blocks. it all constructed well. maybe a keychange with the same blocks then end on some resolving chord?
souperion:
lovely crackles. a nice journey indeed. cycling under the stars.
wassup thunder:
i do enjoy the coasting gear click and speed changes.
suzumebachi:
the metallic ring on the hat sound is great. very laidback.
ddrkirby:
this was delightful. so upbeat.
nickc:
good feeling of moving forward
obscene:
love the piano vs dirty drums.
misael.k:
the tempo carries the idea of steady progress.
arcana:
you've got strength behind your delivery, i just wish the pitch was as tight as the rest of your composition.
thevideogamer:
i liked the simple sine line toward the end. very clean versus the busyness of the drumloops.
invisibleobvserver:
i wanted this to go full aggression, but i do like the groove you build into at the end.
atmospherium:
noice. this is perfect in every way.
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The Journey's the Thing
Souperion -
Adventures on the Road
TheVideoGamer -
Ride Away
A2Z
Great tracks all around. These ones resonated with me the most.
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Adventures on the Road
TheVideoGamer -
Ride Away
A2Z -
Silhouetted Cycle
NickC
TheVideoGamer: perfect mix between energy and calmness.
A2Z: very calming and zen-like entry.
NickC: the rhythmic qualities in this work very well.
awesum: A2Z, Atmospherium, DDRKirby(ISQ), ethansight, InvisibleObserver, NickC, nukage, obScene, Suzumebachi, TheVideoGamer, Wassup Thunder.
good: Arcana, cotmm68030, DarkShadow, Lyra_183, Souperion, thesocialcontract.