One Hour Compo - Round 57 (OHC057)

Votes (16)

Oct 15, 2009 Oinkness
  1. I like leaves
    bjkmenu
  2. Leaves Us Alone
    Snooper_1989
  3. I Hate Autumn
    Shael_Riley
fuckk
Oct 15, 2009 theshaggyfreak
  1. the beasts that stalk the autumn woods
    liquidwind
  2. Bounce back to School
    Arcana
  3. Fall is a German Indie Composer
    Level99
These three made me feel it...deep in my soul....BIRDIES!
Oct 15, 2009 Dhsu
  1. I Hate Autumn
    Shael_Riley
  2. My Begonia
    TheMisterCat
  3. We'll Get On With It
    InvisibleObserver
These are my favorites, in order of how favorite they are.
Oct 15, 2009 starla
  1. My Begonia
    TheMisterCat
  2. I Hate Autumn
    Shael_Riley
  3. I See
    Oinkness
good stuff
Oct 15, 2009 OCRE
  1. I Hate Autumn
    Shael_Riley
  2. Leaves
    Dhsu
  3. the beasts that stalk the autumn woods
    liquidwind
YES
Oct 15, 2009 Shael_Riley
  1. We'll Get On With It
    InvisibleObserver
  2. The Leaves Are Falling Down
    diotrans
  3. Fall is a German Indie Composer
    Level99
Invisible Oberserver presented the theme in a new, but identifiable way, and I'm a sucker for industrial drums, especially in an otherwise non-industrial composition.

Level 99 presented a more traditionally Autumnal that really set the bar high for other like pieces.

Diotrans--that body is bangin'.
Oct 15, 2009 Snooper_1989
  1. My Begonia
    TheMisterCat
  2. Fall is a German Indie Composer
    Level99
  3. Leaves Us Alone
    Snooper_1989
1st: Oh my god, i'm in love.
2nd: It was a toss up between Level99 and InvisibleObserver but I think Level99 won that because he expressed the theme greater in his piece.
3rd: Once again because no one else will. <.<
Oct 15, 2009 Biznut
  1. Leaves
    Dhsu
  2. My Begonia
    TheMisterCat
  3. Fall is a German Indie Composer
    Level99
Dhsu gets first place, although really this was a toss up between TheMisterCat. I gave it to Dhsu because it captured what fall means to me a little better, and that is calm, quiet, silent transtition. Excellent Track.

TMC, wondeful track. Not much more to say, it was fitting to the theme and was composed wonderfully.

Level 99 wins over Oinkness, though it was very close. Oinkness felt a bit more mexican / desert than Autumn. L99 didn't sound THAT autumn to me, but it was a light feel and it sounded some autumn. So 3rd goes to 99, but Great songs by both.

Great work everybody, I can't wait for next week!

Oct 15, 2009 diotrans
  1. I Hate Autumn
    Shael_Riley
  2. the beasts that stalk the autumn woods
    liquidwind
  3. Fall is a German Indie Composer
    Level99
Yay another awesome compo with lots of great entries and a tough voting choice.

Shael - Loved this entry from the get-go, and it just got awesomer as it went on. I like want to hear this song on the radio.
liquidwind - Awesome use of percussion, it reminds me of Halloween, one of my favorite parts of autumn
L99 - Very polished, kind of nostalgic and def reminiscent of autumn.

Honorable Mention: Arcana - sorry I didn't have enough votes. I decided not to vote for this one because I didn't think it fit the theme as well as the others, but I like this piece, it puts a smile on my face ^_^
Oct 15, 2009 Chickenwarlord
  1. I Hate Autumn
    Shael_Riley
  2. Fall is a German Indie Composer
    Level99
  3. The Leaves Are Falling Down
    diotrans
Tough choices for top 3

Props to TheMisterCat, Dhsu and Snooper for making this a hard decision.
Oct 16, 2009 Level99
  1. My Begonia
    TheMisterCat
  2. the beasts that stalk the autumn woods
    liquidwind
  3. Bounce back to School
    Arcana
djsmallpox: That's one piano-oriented family for a fall-theme. Needs a bit more reverb. Let's BBQ.

TheMisterCat: I am in awe. You have won the game, sir. Well fought, and I don't know how you did it, but this could easily be turned into something even grander than it already is! GRAET JERB!

superjoe: This kicked ass as-is, but I'm one of those pretentious jerks with no soul and a lot of evil who does grade a little based on the theme. Please see me after class, and turn this fully-fledged.

TheShaggFreak: Let's start a ska band. Well, anyway, this was very unique. It's like if elton john wrote the song "Funeral for a friend (in Autumn-times)" and then put it in a castlevania game staring jack black in his emo-high-school days. Wow, did I actually just write that out? BELL! BELL! BELL! The atmosphere was awesome.

bjkmenu: with your work, I sort-of know what to expect, but then again, i'm always thrown back with how surprised I end up being. You have some crazy production stuff going on at random times. Kinky.

diotrans: maybe it's just my headphones, but the bass didn't come through like I think you inteded. Very cool vocal effects and whatnot, vocals are always charming. DUDE, HALLOWEEN IS FRICKIN' SOON!

Snooper: the leaves are depressing with the plucks-n-organ, even with the major at the end. thematic, but I would have enjoyed a pattern-change with the plucks. solid entry, keep it up!

dhsu: I'm stealing you someday for a project I haven't quite planned yet. The volume is low, but this immediately gives me a mental montage of driving in the autumn leaves as the world transitions from green to organe, red, brown, then the cold dark of winter. This was fantastic, and you were a pleasantly-unexpected participant. <3

Me: Umm..yeah. I passed out while listening to this last night, cause I wanted to plan out some revisions. I fell asleep on the iPod, and there was a big imprint on my face.

Shael: Back to school means no more games, and you gotta spend all that money on supplies. This was a frickin' hillarious entry. You will be drinking me under the table soon enough, sir.

liquidwind: I'm filled with joy and envy at this entry, and I have no idea how you did it in an hour. This was an intense amount of atmosphere, and for some reason, it does feel like something that would be played in fall, just before winter. Keep an eye on your PMs, I have something for you (it is not sex-related).

OCRE: gotta pick them eggplants before the varmints get 'em! cool beans, dude.

Biznut: interesting for sure, I liked the idea of the fire, and the synth you used was alright, cept it got a little stale from all that panning. Enjoyable, and somewhat happy sounding!

InvisibleObserver: great drum work, awesome cuts and filters. Color me impressed!

Arcana: BIRDIES BIRDIES BIRD BIRD BIRD TWEET TWEET! BIRDS WITH SQUEAKY SHOES! It does sound very Katamari-esque. I APPROVE.

Oinkness: This was...awesome. The only thing that kills it for me is the voice, the playing and writing were great though. Spanish Fall. Also, the rhythm was a little distracting. You're going in a good direction, though.

My predictions this week: TheMisterCat's getting first, Diotrans will get second, and Shael's getting Third. I'm just saying this for shit's and giggles.
Oct 16, 2009 Arcana
  1. The Leaves Are Falling Down
    diotrans
  2. I Hate Autumn
    Shael_Riley
  3. the beasts that stalk the autumn woods
    liquidwind
diotrans for creativeness. The use of the effects (and the 70s aura) was great. I think with a bit more development this is something that could turn out to be really good. I think you should continue working on this. It's excellent work for one hour

Hey I give points to Shael for writing a emo song :D

Nice song liquidwind, the transitions and the overall spookiness made this track very interesting.
Oct 17, 2009 elsalluz
  1. I See
    Oinkness
  2. Leaves
    Dhsu
  3. 23rd of Autumn
    OCRE
Oinkness - despite the flaws, I could tell what direction he was raking me. Proprtly set up; the downfallL vocals, irrelevant mistakes (techical diffivulties, may I stress, are irrelevant).

Dhsu - well executed, no real flaws. The only thing that placed Oinkness on top was emotion.

Level 99 - good composure, however, I get the feeling of not enough emotion, or perhaps a need for more subtle changes and less direct sounds. I hope I am not being too opinionated.



Oct 18, 2009 JH Sounds
  1. the beasts that stalk the autumn woods
    liquidwind
  2. Fall is a German Indie Composer
    Level99
  3. I Hate Autumn
    Shael_Riley
A reasoning for all seasons
Oct 19, 2009 InvisibleObserver
  1. Fall is a German Indie Composer
    Level99
  2. I Hate Autumn
    Shael_Riley
  3. The Leaves Are Falling Down
    diotrans
Top 3 voted I felt all fit the theme and were on par with one another, so don't think of my vote as creating a hiearchy of who's song was best.
Oct 22, 2009 liquidwind
  1. Fall is a German Indie Composer
    Level99
  2. We'll Get On With It
    InvisibleObserver
  3. I Hate Autumn
    Shael_Riley
Level99

I love the synths against the acoustic guitar rhythms, I could actually see this being used as background music for timelapse photography of the progression of autumn

InvisibleObserver

great percussion, love how minimalist it is otherwise while the crazy drums keep it interesting, unusual approach but I like it a lot

Shael

this could have been just the chorus on repeat and I'd have likely voted for it