1000 Year Door - Petal Meadows (MnP84)
Dec 08, 2017 Xenonetix
KlevarKoopa - I really liked the idea of complimenting the track with more bird sounds, but I think mastering needed a lot more work. Nice idea though!
satoka-eldon - Not sure on the velocity & volume balance with this one, and just slightly too slow to match the feel of the original, but some really nice stuff thrown in throughout.
Silverpool - Excellent work overall, although notably experimental. Some good stuff to build upon though!
Dec 09, 2017 Dex
satoka eldon - Overall loudness level is low and the volume shifts too much over the course of the tune. Also I don't think lowering the tempo like you did works - it makes the song feel a little somber, contradicting its playful nature.
KlevarKoopa - This is great! If you want to improve the mix I think you could make the ocean a little quieter, change the pan on the bird chirps from time to time, and give it a tighter ending.
Silverpool - I like it! Good ending. The bells get a little loud around 2:40 (I think they should play more of a supporting role), and I would have liked to hear the drums continue at 0:18, but other than that no complaints.
Dec 09, 2017 Silverpool
satoka-eldon: I'm personally not a fan of the slower tempo and lower energy at the beginning, but I like the change in intensity in the middle and I think it's an interesting take on the source.
Chadlee: I like how you spiced up the source with the added percussion and how you filled the soundscape without flooding it.